The Night Seemingly Like Any Other

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Jul 25, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    One night as I was half-passed out on my bed
    It seemed to be like any other night
    But suddenly, it became hot
    Hotter than it should have been
    Even in the summer
    And I heard booming laughter

    So I sat up
    Opened my eyes
    Looked around
    To see what seemed to be
    Animals dancing around a fire
    Screaming SATAN IS LORD
    ALL HAIL SATAN, PRINCE OF DARKNESS
    And laughing and dancing together

    Suddenly it came to a halt
    One thundering voice
    Demanded I stand
    I did stand and I saw
    A tall man, cloaked in darkness
    Fanged teeth pulled back
    Into a grimace or a smile
    He said I AM SATAN
    DANCE WITH ME, THIS NIGHT
    What choice did I have
    I danced with him in hell
    At least I suppose that's where we were

    It seemed to be hours
    Hot as it was, I didn't sweat a bit
    As I danced with this Satan
    This creature I didn't believe in
    As dawnlight came stealing over the hills
    He said WE MUST LEAVE
    CREATURES AS OURSELVES SHOULD NOT
    STAY IN THE LIGHT
    And I closed my eyes as the fire was damped out

    When I opened them I was back in my room
    I thought it a dream until
    I felt a peculiar sensation in my hand
    I looked and saw the number
    666 burned upon my left hand
    666, the number of the beast
    What had happened, I wondered,
    On that night seemingly like any other?

    its a bit different from my usual stuff, comments or criticism welcome...
     
  2. children of korn

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    awesome poem, i love it
     
  3. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    omg i love it. truly awesome.
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    thanx its weird tho lol
     
  5. Morganna

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    sometimes we feel weird, we ought to express it more.
     
  6. Freakymetalchik

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    thanks for reading it, glad you liked it :)
     
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