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Atmospheric Discussion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Psychedelic Bones, Jul 19, 2007.

  1. Psychedelic Bones

    Psychedelic Bones Member

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    Under this cover of elements,
    my being in spanned to every similarity
    In essence, I am the reflection of carbon, oxygen, and memory in the eyes of foreign cries
    Because , of course, cries have eyes, legs, and skin
    Of course all things abstract, as inanimate as they may seem, live, die, and linger
    In the construction manuels of breathing creatures
    But this breath, toxic and hidden,
    is the secret gamma ray that pierces
    All that are sound of mind
    Even the soft asylums are sound in mind,
    In the way that the prisoner never feels guity
    The simple configuration of everything
    that is irreplacable
    is undiscoverable to the proclamed genius that put forth the idea that one person
    can never be one with themselves
    I beg to disagree
    as I am complete in my mind,
    as my body is a line of connection to other minds
    But connections break and tangle
    when raped minds and misused bodies
    Violate the sweet ether
    that thoughts and words travel through
    To drench in a rational solution,
    Is usually never the answer
    to a psychologically celestial question

    Thanks for taking the time to read my giberish
     
  2. jim kirby

    jim kirby Member

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    bones my man ... were you on acid when you wrote this?
     
  3. Psychedelic Bones

    Psychedelic Bones Member

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    Nah, just the fun bud and some quality time with a park bench
     
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