Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jim kirby, Jul 16, 2007.
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thats really deep and i love it
That's fantastic man. Reminds me of a doors song in its imagery
thanx very much for the post ... very glad you like it
thanx man and i love the doors.
That's beautiful. I just love it, not quite sure why, but it just clicked inside with me.
thanx man.
Great line. Reminds me of many frigid flirts from my teens. Keep up the good work. Peace, Aidan.
very astute observation Aidan. this piece was inspired by just such an entity. thanx for your post.
its good, i really liked it,
glad you enjoyed it as its one of my favourites ... peace.
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