the absence of life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jim kirby, Jul 16, 2007.

  1. jim kirby

    jim kirby Member

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    ...............
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    thats really deep and i love it
     
  3. floydianslip6

    floydianslip6 Senior Member

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    That's fantastic man. Reminds me of a doors song in its imagery
     
  4. jim kirby

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    thanx very much for the post ... very glad you like it
     
  5. jim kirby

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    thanx man and i love the doors.
     
  6. Psychedelic Bones

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    That's beautiful. I just love it, not quite sure why, but it just clicked inside with me.
     
  7. jim kirby

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    thanx man.
     
  8. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Great line. Reminds me of many frigid flirts from my teens.

    Keep up the good work.

    Peace,
    Aidan.
     
  9. jim kirby

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    very astute observation Aidan. this piece was inspired by just such an entity. thanx for your post.
     
  10. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    its good, i really liked it, ;)
     
  11. jim kirby

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    glad you enjoyed it as its one of my favourites ... peace.
     
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