Seductive

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Jul 13, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    engulf my seductive scent swallow me whole
    penetrate my being break my spirit
    end my presence of innoccence

    make me bleed break my bones
    severe my flesh bite my heart
    try it all make me feel
     
  2. deram_scholzara

    deram_scholzara Member

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    *hug* can you feel that?
     
  3. CrystalShip

    CrystalShip Member

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    feeling alive isn't easy for everyone :)
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Powerful & raw, fills the senses.
     
  5. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    That is a really powerful piece.
    Excellent........
    Aidan
     
  6. jim kirby

    jim kirby Member

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    the end of innocence or the innocence of the end? I like it. nice
     
  7. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    like it like it no i love it! :)
     
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