The Plane

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Julie Bukowski, Jul 10, 2007.

  1. Julie Bukowski

    Julie Bukowski Member

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    It's hard to remember the people,
    strange to see the divisions in land,

    Thirty three thousand feet in the air,
    it looks like a snapshot that portrays the perfect image of serenity,
    Peace,

    The problems of the world are utterly meaningless here,
    worries of crime, hate, poverty, and war are non-existant,

    What the world is,
    just a glass globe,
    spinning precariously until an inexperienced hand causes it to fall,

    From where I was, I am,
    and thus can control nothing,
    can fear nothing,

    I will sit back,
    and float on.
     
  2. RexLee

    RexLee Banned

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    very nice i enjoyed reading it :)
     
  3. Julie Bukowski

    Julie Bukowski Member

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    :] thank you
     
  4. Littlwing70

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    Nice, I like the visual I get. Feel like I am looking out the window of the plane.
     
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