Disconnected

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RexLee, Jul 7, 2007.

  1. RexLee

    RexLee Banned

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    Dont wait for me when you disconnect,
    I will be with you soon

    no matter where it takes you,
    we will always be under the same moon

    dont you tremble, just walk on through,
    not too long and I will join you

    I know the distance cannot be measured by miles or time,
    but I know i will be get there with this unholy crime

    Just you wait, you will be alone no more,
    I will make this right, just as they were before

    I have the fix right here in my hand,
    I care not if it the easy way out, nor if it makes me less of a man

    I can feel them now, I know thier touch, I will not fight,
    it wont be long now, I'll see you on the otherside of the light


    all comments and critism is welcome
     
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    RexLee Banned

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  3. blackheartbitch

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    this is really good. kinda confusing in the begining but that culd be just me...its good tho
     
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