A glimpse at dawn

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippychrome, Jul 5, 2007.

  1. hippychrome

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    A glimpse at dawn

    Such a beautiful sunrise, Blue skies with clouds A wonderful sun, the energies are wonderful... I miss the skies and flying, 1 ton of thrust booming upwards up unto the skies... a slight weightloss as the wings are turned to point down ,... an amazing feeling as the sun and morning energises you.. .so beautiful so wonderful, the feeling is so amazing.

    Heavy gravity hits you as you fall, but the thrust of the jet engines comforts the fall.. Amazing it is, amazing it feels as your stomach is tensed to endure the fall :)

    The wonderful sun shines in ones eyes, amazing is the feeling of eyes and the heart...

    Great it is, so beautiful, so wonderful, your eyes and soul relax, the heat in your eyes.. your soul + spirit feels so much love,

    It is so beautifully divine.

     
  2. WoodRat

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    OH!

    HELL!
    YEAH!

    I was supposed to become a fighter pilot, right up until the military school dismissed my application as being to, "Unpredictable".
    Thank you for that rehash.
    Now I fly on clearstrips and this!
     
  3. hippychrome

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    Unpredictable? Hey, a pilot needs to be resourcful and take the inntiave sometimes for opterunistic targets for bonuses and promotion. So what was their problem with you?
     
  4. hippychrome

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    Oh, to make my point, I was watchiing sunrise, realised I missed Civilian flights as a passenger, and the rest about opertunistic targerts is in things like 'Over G fighters' on my Xbox 360 + PC games etc lol.
     
  5. RexLee

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    i really like how you turned somthing that you wouldnt think could be amade a good poem out of or atleast i didnt think so but all in all i enjoyed reading it
     
  6. hippychrome

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    Just a flight of fancy whilst the sun energised me at dawn lol. :)
     
  7. kbwright

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    Nicely done, makes for a good read!
     
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