its kind of a mixture of thoughts im not really good at writting love poems but i felt like it so here it is. critisism is welcomed What is love? its a complex matter that the mind cannot comprehend not merely a feeling but an action. Love as i see it is the way your mind is completely occupied by a certian person and everything you do relates to them or reminds you of them. When you love someone you long for them like you've never longed for anyone before, you cant think of your life without them. Love grows and developes but never leaves its always there in the back of your mind even after you sware you hate this person and dont want anything to do with them you will always love them regardless. A very wise person once told me you never stop loving your first love and i asked her how can that be she simply answered you may move on and marry other people but deep down you will always have that fire within you that no one else has given to you like that first.
hey its pretty hehehe my eyes hurt like fucking helll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i like it.
your style reminds me of my style.... more of a collection of poetic thoughts and questions than actual poetry..... or at least that's how i look at it, but that is my own opinon.... i like it though
Hot! It's founding and explorative, the way a growing mind should be. Hope you days continue to brighten passed the willie nillies of young hardship and tourny. You're still at the age, where it justifies, how far you'll be able to go in life. I almost missed mine, but I'm a fighter, and I thinker, just as I think you are. Peace.
yea life definately hasnt been easy for me...but im still young im trying to change my outlook so that im not hating the world like i am now...thanks it means a lot that someone even a complete stranger can beleive in me
Hell yeah, lots a people buy it and lots a people don't, but I, like my friends strap on boots to kick ass for others, not against others, unless they're really askin for it in size. Peace.
I still say you break up your lines WAYYYY too much and a lot of your ideas are kinda stale, but that's something A) you can't avoid B) will lessen with practice so my advice to you is practice practice practice and that first love thing is complete bullshit for most people
No dude, just broken people... You should know better than to say that to a fifteen year old man, with all due respect.
the love comment? I completley disagree I see so many girls prolong their stay in terrible relationships in the name of 'first love' young people get this idea built up in their first love is going to be the only (good) love, and in 99% of cases it's not true I am hoping me and my gal stay together forever, but you have to keep the future open to possibility and as they say "[sometimes] the best thing about first love is second love"
im not caught in my first love...im ready to move on the only problem is that he isnt...so im moving on behind his back...i have a boyfriend that my first love doesnt even know about...and the relationship im in now is great and i want it to last...but it cant cuz ill be moving in august and itll be too complicated for the both of us if we tried the whole long distance thing
Hey dude, I just thought you were handing her an ill message of love is a false concept, I withdraw my veracious slurrings... @Blackheart Well then my only advice left on this is, get the idea of love down to heart. I don't view anything as imposible, and the only thing that works against over whelming impusle is reflection/meditation. Humans'd do best to learn to increment as they go, private time, public time, and the specifics... Peace.
My friends claim it's pronounced: e-sa-tly I tell them it's three words bunched together by cavement munching out stoned thinking up new words, hense: Eggs Act Lee, it's like hooked on Phonix! "Hey, slow down..."
the first cut is the deepest according to cat stevens ... you've summed up your feelings very well bhb ... resurrection time ... luv ya!
