A Wondrous Poem of Sorts in Which I Birthed

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DISGRUNTLEDtoast, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. DISGRUNTLEDtoast

    DISGRUNTLEDtoast Member

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    Ahem, this is me poem of sorts, in which i birthed... enjoy:

    Bananas, they're soft and yummy

    Bananas, they're yellow and tasty

    They taste good in mah belly

    Gobble Gobble Gobble



    hope you liked it... and please be truthful in your commentary, my son, for if you think it is the best poem ever devised by man, then go ahead and say so, it might make me think about writing another, maybe even better poetic poemy poem for all yous guys.
    Peace.
     
    DISGRUNTLEDtoast, Sep 5, 2004
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  3. DISGRUNTLEDtoast

    DISGRUNTLEDtoast Member

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    :eek:
    All i can say is "WOW"
    Keep up the good work, MAtey!
     
    DISGRUNTLEDtoast, Sep 5, 2004
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  5. kitsune

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    that'll pass for the best thing ever on THIS forum
     
    kitsune, Sep 5, 2004
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  7. littleskinny

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    The title is genius!
     
    littleskinny, Sep 6, 2004
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