just be true

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sirius, Jun 26, 2007.

  1. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    when you have a regret
    that you confess and repent
    make it mean something

    from the bottom of your soul
    make your sorrow your toll
    just show me something

    i see nothing in your eyes
    but your denial of all the lies
    that is turning this something into nothing

    my head clouds with the fears
    and is fueled by the tears
    will you fight or give up and do nothing?
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    this is very deep. sounds like something one of me&my friends would write...well done
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    its a beautiful poem
     
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