Just enough to weaken my knees, Just enough to make me smile, You wanted me Just enough, To keep me there, Just enough, For just a while. You were never really mine to keep, You were never really mine to hold, My arms have fallen, to my sides, Your heart is frozen- Now mine is cold. Cold enough to make me blind, Cold enough to make me numb, I gave it all for- Just enough, Now-I've had enough, This time, I'm done.
I really like it, it shows a very good lesson being learned, and the tone makes it sound frantic and full of despair... but then you accept it willingly, excelent. Heart breaks draw the picture... time colors them in
sorry bout the short reply, I wrote it after a 14 hour over-nighter. It was part of a poem I wrote after my gf of 5 years and I split. And thank you for your comment on mine, it made my week
What on earth is it about ????? I cant make head nor tail out of it - just a collection of words about someone talking to themself I think
It's about a love relationship that was painful . It's about the pain involved in caring for someone and being jilted and misused.
Thanks, trekker! I'm actually not too fond of this poem..but I appreciate the support! Oh, and Mr. PoemBased-glad to make your week....!
very tru its about love gone horribly wrong...ur style is honest and open...have u writen anything with symbolizism in it???
I love the rhyme. I don't know how to start praising it but.... I really liked it. I have to go off searching through the old pages for more of your stuff? Thanks, Peace, Aidan
