The world in which I dwell

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Jun 18, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    May the world keep hold of me
    send me back to the place of which I see
    back to the place of darkness and fears
    back to the place of heartbreak and tears.
    Everytime I find something good it slips away
    everytime I find someone to love me they can't stay.

    Another world inside your own
    a world of hatred and groan
    a world of loneliness and hell
    the world in which I dwell
    I've been here before
    and everytime the pain increases more.

    The world has turned its back on me
    even the person I thought loved me
    has gone and turned his back on us
    Why is there such a big fuss
    ringing in my ears
    followed by my lonely tears.

    The world in which I live
    does nothing but give
    pain and sorrow
    maybe I'll find happiness tomorrow
    but it never seems to come
    I just go back to where I'm from.
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i've seen this too havent i? lol...i still like it as much as i did before. ... i guess thats it.
     
  3. TurquoiseRose

    TurquoiseRose Member

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    Emo much??
    Consider the love around yourself.
    <3
     
  4. children of korn

    children of korn Member

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    your poem fucking suxs ass...........but you have talent
     
  5. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    lol, contradict yourself much?
     
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