i dunno what to call it..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by AlawlessLulu69420, Jun 18, 2007.

  1. AlawlessLulu69420

    AlawlessLulu69420 Member

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    we live in a colorful world
    you and me
    i just cant let you go
    letting you free, would be silly of me
    miles and miles away
    oh stil i wish you were here to rescue me
    you make me feel grown up every day
    i want to stay

    sympthy is all around
    i got you in my arms
    but only in my mind
    ill travel t the end to my love
    all the others were just lust
    but this one, im in love

    you are going to be mine
    i kept my promise
    with young eyes, you have so many problems
    i wanna give my, give myself to you
    but im as hurt just as you
    Ill make it alright
    thats what im going to do
    ill never leave your side, you never want me to
    we think of each other differently
    but just keep in mind
    what they think are laughs are just all lies
    Im gonna love you for the rest of my life
     
  2. WoodRat

    WoodRat Banned

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    Call it you're take on things thus far, with feeling! :)

    I'm not good with titles yet thought it might help to get some clarity, anatural part of drafting...
    Peace.
     
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