What describes me and you Nothing more to say or do It's over and done with now The only question I have is how I don't know it was right All our happiness in sight But now it's done and I am lonely Trusting in myself only Hating the world and everyone Not letting myself see the sun Can I move on with my life Or will I end it with this strife? Hey criticize please, I want to know your honest opinion of this poem...
It sounds to me like the last girlfriend I had. I ended up fucking her over majorly. I've moved on but I still have questions. They don't eat me up but I have a patient curiosity.
Well you sure are a fourteen year old chick alright. You understand a sentiment of strong realization in a negatory sense. It speeks a voice of significant loss, and now the horizon could be begged to hold greater day's. Excellent, you seem to be developing a bit ahead of the curve.
i think its good but ive heard better from u babe. its really deep and i kno how u feel really i do. i luv u mwah <3
