A glimps

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  1. CrucifiedDreams

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    Well... erm...

    We all have a novel within us and you jhave unleashed the first few paragraphs of yours, well done! [​IMG]

    It is intreging and yet down to earth. I can see this comes from some life experience. With in the first paragraphs you have made a couple of hooks, namely whats wrong with Roxy and what has happened between James and her. You clearly have based the characters on a few of your friends, if I guess right.

    You level of creativity is inspiring I must say. I used to write a bit, I've never tried it out again, and you inevation has ressurected my interest in it. Thank you and I love it, looking forward to more of your work, may it be writing, or photography.
     
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    Thank you.

    This is actually a chunk out of the middle of my story, but non the less, I'm glad it caught your interest. And yes it is based around a group of friends.

    It's funny how that works, artists inspiring artists. Peace inspired me to start writing again, and I'm glad it's made you want to try it again too, and you should. :)

    Thanks for the kind words.
     
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    I havent started yet, wondering about subject really. Was thinking of doing something on the subject of segregation or something along those lines. Ill post it wehn I start.

    And my kind words are dished out for free so there are more where they came from

     
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    Well, I've had a try here. this wou;ld be the beggining. It's set in about the 1960s to 70s. Enjoy!
    There we go, say what you will. It's the writing of a slightly depressed 14 year old. Oh, and I don't mean to like, steal your thread or anything, if you want me to move it to a new thread then just say so.
     
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