Spontanious Haiku

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Jun 8, 2007.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    light heals all
    spirit awaken
    we are one

    Peace and love
     
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    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Another spontanious poem:

    Love exists in all
    We are completely love
    It radiates from us
    Like rays of divine light
    Have you discovered it?
    Within your soul?
    Within your being?
    Love exists in all!

    Peace and love
     
  3. myself

    myself just me

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    That was good.
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Thank you, Myself! Om mani padme hum!

    Peace and love
     
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    Bathing in light,
    Sun bright
    Surrounded by eternal love

    Peace and love
     
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    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Spontanious Poem on Peace

    Om shanti, shanti, shanti!
    We walk together as one
    Brothers and sisters
    of the same parents
    Seeing one in all
    And all in one
    Om Shanti, shanti, shanti

    Peace and love
     
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    i really like the emotion of love peace and harmony, you describe the feelings well in you poetry, its encouraging to know that people still love out there and feel that we are all one. it reminds me a lot of john lennons work, if i didn't know better i would say you were a libra, they talk a lot about the balance of life and the importance of love and peace. keep up the good writing i love it
     
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    Actually, I am a virgo! Thank you for the kind compliments. Om mani padme hum!

    Peace and love
     
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    One!
    Ram!
    Tara!
    Buddha!
    Jesus!
    One!

    Peace and love
     
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    im on the cusp of virgo and leo, i figured you either had to be libra or virgo because i felt such a strong connection with the feeling of the poem. right one

    peace love and groovy colors
     
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    Love

    Peace and love
     
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    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Divine light
    Shines within
    Let it out

    Peace and love
     
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    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    The divine love
    One in all
    Awaken!

    peace and love
     
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    I am a hearltess cold blooded hate thirst unending basterd

    I must sodomize myself every morning when I awake
    I go to work and all my peers frown upon my presence
    I am slop for the vultures to pick cleanly away with their prodding beaks
    I fukken hate vultures
    Somebody in this room right now makes me ill
    I should like to beat him over the head repeatedly with many random objects of heavy weight and sturdy build
    Tonight I experience another torturous encounter with a deseased ancestor
    My sole aches for brighter days
    The brightness I know is fuiled by my malice
    I temper to fuk myself in tight corners of misery that unfolds before me
    Somebody pull the trigger,
    open the hatch and let me out
    gone I am
    -fin-
     
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    WoodRat Banned

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    Wo, hang on their chicko!

    I have a better sense despite my rough obscurities to offend people in complete cold blood on this forum.
    I just added a contrast, and found it humorous.

    When I wrote that, I was on a haha binge, and was typically thinking of an "office space" context.
    This can be noted by the use of the sex-case "him".

    But I aslo do see where you're comming from.
    Never ending happy parade results in mass regurgitation for some.
    I just love being mal-adjusted for haha's sake.
     
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    WoodRat Banned

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    Well then ya can't count mine cuz it's not technically haiku.
    So here's my rewright in favor!

    I am slop
    I must sodomize myself
    dead I have become
    -Fin-

    Ofcourse then there's always hiedes' to jackie on that seventies show:
    My heart aches,
    I look at you, I vommit,
    Die away from me.

    This makes me think of a sour asian philosophical soul just aching in mysterious, not yet fully understood ways.
    It's is a fukken riot.
     
  17. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    My head it aches so
    I find I must eat a stone
    To relieve the pain

    Japanese Green Tea
    And lemon-flavored iced tea
    Taste pretty damn good

    Books on my floor-drum
    Papers on my round table
    A hand on the fridge
     
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    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    Damn, half the shit in this thread isn't even Haiku! And I was so meticulous...
     
  19. WoodRat

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    That's why it's called a work :bigear:
    and it's more a perspective of experience than
    heavily annalitic concentration.
    On average I can spit out all kinds of stuff in various ways that I come in contact with.
    uh... and I'm not scared by the notion of tackling sensitive subjects.
    Since it's a visible rarity in society today, aside from rich famous people.
     
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    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    Just proves to me again and again that every time I break the rules (most of the time), it's the best possible thing to do. Especially as far as writing goes.
     

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