Between Kisses

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PoemBased, Jun 6, 2007.

  1. PoemBased

    PoemBased Member

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    I lay in wait and hold my breath.​
    Two moons in blue they glow​
    Over a sea of bliss in the shape of lips;​
    As pure as untouched snow.​
    And there it is I long to swim,​
    Under those moons of Ice,​
    And wadding there till evers end​
    This man could spend his life.​
    But I fear the tides are changing,​
    For the sea, it pulls away;​
    And so, I'll sit upon the shores,​
    Waiting; for the sea to come back my way.​
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Nice, that was soft and elegant.
     
  3. CrystalShip

    CrystalShip Member

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    beautiful
     
  4. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    lovely! really enjoyed it.
     
  5. Spaceboy13

    Spaceboy13 Member

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    that was really fuckin good man, great imagery, great description, loved it
     
  6. Autentique

    Autentique wonderfabulastic

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    that made sigh.
     
  7. weaselpop

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    Nice. :)

    I thought it said "waddling" though. Spoiled the first reading. :(
     

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