Untitled (you pick a title)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by CrystalShip, Jun 3, 2007.

  1. CrystalShip

    CrystalShip Member

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    I rarely write anything, but i felt inspired so i wrote this little thing :D..
    let me know what you think , and give it a title if you want.


    The extreme or the balance?
    which will you strive for
    will you seek knowledge beyond this plane
    or will you choose the obvious.
    dig in deep my friend, you will find treasures that are priceless
    or pain that is boundless.
    reach out to the face
    reach out from the maze
    reach out from the madness
    reach out from the sadness
    The path you choose, will be yours to walk
    no one will share it with you
    no matter how much they are close.
    choose..
    choose wisely.
     
  2. PoemBased

    PoemBased Member

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    what about The Price of a Path
     
  3. CrystalShip

    CrystalShip Member

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    sounds perfectly fitting!
     
  4. guinea

    guinea Member

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    how bout "The Choice". i like the previous title as well. the poem itself is really magnificant, you have a really nice way with words./ i can tell that it really comes from within you, you have a really right on writing style bro./
     
  5. CrystalShip

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    Thanks alot mate =D
     

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