Revelation

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SweetMarie, May 28, 2007.

  1. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    The sun is crying.
    Dripping fire-
    Melting time.

    Creating puddles of life around us.

    We all jump in,
    Burn our skin,
    But start to swim....

    Quickly in circles,
    Gasping for air,
    Breathing in Hate,
    And choking on Fear,
    Tomorrow is painless,
    Until it is here,
    It's always tomorrow-
    The answers are there.

    But, yesterday's Future,
    Today's always the same.

    The sun is still sobbing,
    And so, the fire remains.
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    party all night and sleep all day... nice flow!
     
  3. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I like it, cool poem :)
     
  4. thcinfectedhair

    thcinfectedhair Member

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    push things off for tomorrow, always tomorrow indeed man. tight shit
     
  5. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    Thanks, all-I appreciate it!
     
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