Her Reminder with No Name

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Charlotte84, May 18, 2007.

  1. Charlotte84

    Charlotte84 Member

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    Her Reminder with No Name

    He could not imagine how she felt that day

    The supermarket drive, she purchased and prayed.

    Will it answer yes or answer no

    Three minutes go by

    And positive it showed.



    He could not imagine how she felt that day

    And when she told him

    His reaction, it blew her away.

    She cried and cried and did not feel safe

    She was scared and hurt

    Yet nothing he'd say



    He could not imagine how she felt that day

    He angered her so much

    And she'll never forget

    What she did for him

    She’ll never forgive



    He could not imagine how she felt that day,

    The waiting until called,

    Eventually to sleep she went

    Awoke

    The blood it poured



    He could not imagine how she felt that day

    Her belly in constant pain

    She opened her eyes

    And to her surprise the reminder

    It still remained



    Of what she one had

    That in seconds she lost

    The tears she cried

    And the feelings of loss



    Now time has moved on, with these memories contained

    But he could not imagine how she feels today

    To understand the promises he made

    Will never be kept, have been thrown away.



    Why couldn't he care?

    Why couldn't he love?

    That girl was his too

    So why was she the only one?

    Who suffers and hurts

    And lives with the pain

    Over the baby girl

    Who has no name?


    -Charli
     
  2. The GuitarMann

    The GuitarMann Member

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    wow. this is so sad but in a way beautiful. i'm so moved. i like the way you write to. it;s easy to understand.
    kick ass man, kick ass!!!
     
  3. Charlotte84

    Charlotte84 Member

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    Thanks Gitarmann!

    I'm glad you like it....
    I'm still not sure how i feel about it
    meself yet!

    -Charli
     
  4. MagicFlyingSaucer

    MagicFlyingSaucer Member

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    Great poem! Very descriptive style, I liked it lots :)
     
  5. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I definitely like it =]
    Great job. :)
     

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