No time

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The GuitarMann, Mar 21, 2007.

  1. The GuitarMann

    The GuitarMann Member

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    There it is,

    above us all.

    Growing big,

    growing tall.



    It has a face,

    that's yet to be seen.

    Full of death,

    Full of teeth.



    It's over your shoulder.

    It's in your sleep.

    We're growing closer,

    we're in to deep.



    I see it in my sleep.

    It burns through my soul.

    The children they weep,

    They have no where to go.



    With all this destruction.

    I wonder why.

    Why We were born.

    All we do is fight.



    It angers my hands,

    to see it's coming.

    The end of times,

    the death of loving



    And what can i do,

    but just sit here and wait.

    My time grows cold.

    My body it aches..



    I feel like i'm fading,

    away into the dark.

    Hold my hands ,

    There all i got.



    So before i go,

    I'll leave you this warning.

    We need to change.

    the darkness is coming.
     
  2. BrooklynRider

    BrooklynRider Member

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    nice. very evocative.
     
  3. Free_love_peace224

    Free_love_peace224 Member

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    Wow. That is amazing! that totally explains what the world is coming to without even saying it. this place is coming to a freakin' end and no one even notices...let alone care!
     
  4. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    cool I had one similar but with more examples
     
  5. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    cool poem =]
     

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