Nerdly poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BodyElectric, May 11, 2007.

  1. BodyElectric

    BodyElectric Member

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    To Cechir:

    Dare we expect comfort in this season?
    Paths that give no respite to weary feet,
    With desires that would be labeled treason.
    Harsh rumours are whispered in Temple Street.
    A gentle companion to hold at night
    Easing the burden of destiny’s weight
    With an empathy of the inner fight -
    The call of her soul's unrelenting fate.
    Ancient rhythms of the world transition,
    And Belaska's dance shall not be ignored.
    Bound by spirit to serve with submission,
    To dance the edge of the Dark Prince’s sword.
    Blood-matted eyes gaze upon Tomorrow
    Chanting an omen of war and sorrow




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    (I haven't written anything in a damn long time and this morning I wake up and blast off a sonnet about my Evercrack 2 character. I'm such a nerd. And yes I know my iamb is off :1eye: )
     
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Wow. This poem is so...intense. I like it!
     
  3. ConeyIslandOfTheMind

    ConeyIslandOfTheMind Member

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    Haha...more power to ya when you can write something that great about...a computer/video (don't know which one, sorry) game. :D
     
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