Rain

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MagicFlyingSaucer, May 9, 2007.

  1. MagicFlyingSaucer

    MagicFlyingSaucer Member

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    Tonight it rained torrentially

    And we walked home in it

    Jumping in puddles

    Ruining your new shoes



    Clothes soaked and sticking

    We laughed and talked

    About lost dreams

    And broken hopes



    My best friend - I love you!

    I wish I could have told you

    On this strange wet night

    That I really love you

     
  2. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    I liked your poem, it was sweet
     
  3. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    I liked your poem, it was sweet
     
  4. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Cool poem =]
     

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