Untitled.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ConeyIslandOfTheMind, May 5, 2007.

  1. ConeyIslandOfTheMind

    ConeyIslandOfTheMind Member

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    My attempt at some iambs. And some pentameter.

    The number of curls on the top of your head
    Mocks my perception of who is and is not dead
    I'd like to believe your eyes opened the world
    But it seems that they only imitate sand and pearls
    So lighten the skies with the heat of the morn
    Wrestle my cheek in the vast fields of corn
    With rough winding fingers, caress my inner ear
    Tell me what ails thee and perhaps God will hear
    For he that makes haste in thunder and seas
    Is first at my backdoor and first at my knees
    I could let you in, let you follow me home
    But what would become of us when there is no more foam?
    The ocean only froths when it's frightened or sad
    But you and your eyelids make waves of what I had
    I will open my door for only one tiny glimpse
    Of a man and his sea and his eyes made of chintz
    Sing me a sonnet and hold me til noon
    And maybe I'll love you, for forever comes too soon.
     
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Sweet =] Good job!
     
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