explain

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Hobes, Apr 29, 2007.

  1. Hobes

    Hobes Member

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    where are we going in life.
    is it jist me or are all of you right.
    we keep going to a destination with no light at the end of the tunle
    and yet if there was one we would freak.
    everything else we want to get to the end
    but somehow we wish we could rebegin.
    and then there are some who want to skip
    but they are helped to think like every else.
    or it is to late and they lose
    or do they win?
    explain

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    i did not spell check i will do that later but i am lazy.

    EDIT:eek:k i think i got it right now
     
  2. Hobes

    Hobes Member

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    i made a pole so if you did not post (i understand) you could at least give me your thoughts
     
  3. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    i be twice yer age and that be twice as profound as anything I've ever written!
     
  4. Hobes

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    wow thank you!
     

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