last nights rantings

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by thereaperman44, Apr 13, 2007.

  1. thereaperman44

    thereaperman44 Member

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    Whitewash

    Self obsessed beyond belief

    Urgency to release

    Tension dividing

    What’s hiding?

    Inability to perceive

    Give or receive

    Tactics alienating

    Stop complaining

    Mental block

    Audit soul stock

    How selfish, being human

    Panic ensuing

    Narrow mind

    Abstract find

    Locked in pity

    Nothing spoken equally

    Growing up overdue

    Who is who?



    Melting pots

    Anger bubbling

    Angst compounding

    Single vendetta heeding

    Self loathing seething

    Scratched getting deeper

    Hills steeper

    Over involved

    Grudgingly devolved

    Sensitive too divulge

    Keep secrets quiet

    Then deny it

    Only right

    Disappear out of sight



    Exertion

    What doesn’t get said or mentioned

    Bottled up and reinvented

    Inaccurate descriptions

    Own bitter omissions

    Agreement isolated

    Not that complicated

    Suffocating opinions

    Lessening options

    Stubborn reconciliation

    Intermittent patience

    Blurred waves

    Exploring hallucinated caves













    Or something

    Resolve what’s eating

    Save the bleating

    Open hearts are pathetic

    Sensitive directive

    Altered objective

    Should totally devote

    Prove ability to cope

    Not wallow and mope

    Guilty of affection

    Lengthening separation

    Constant reminders

    Progress hinders

    Excessive focus

    Devious motives

    Ugly core

    Knuckles soar

    Swollen and bloated

    Apathy goaded

    Wicked games

    Such a shame



    Pathological

    Importance of freedom

    Worth noting

    Needs prevalent

    Actions relevant

    Reassurance essential

    Mood swings expediential

    Lonely trials revisited

    Getting humiliated

    Surprising let down

    Scold and frown

    Tears redundant

    Weakness succumb

    Hazy categories

    Pointed to exactly

    Raw blame

    Nothing will change

    Objections screamed

    Dare not dream

    Steps too adventurous

    Truth offensive

    Space absolutely essential

    Fallout torrential

     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Sounds like a troubled relationship.

    Very good piece of work, in my opinion.
     
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