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how does it feel?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by las puertas, Apr 1, 2007.

  1. las puertas

    las puertas Member

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    How does it feel to know he’ll never love you like you love him?
    what does it feel like to know he can’t even stand to be in a room with you any longer let alone talk to you
    inside you carry your pain because no one in the outside world would ever understand
    the end is a part of your every beginning now where is the hope for a new sun? How does it feel?
     
    las puertas, Apr 1, 2007
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  3. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    I dislike this piece most fervently.
     
    Nalencer, Apr 1, 2007
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  5. FreindlyMuskOx

    FreindlyMuskOx Member

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    " I dislike this piece most fervently."

    I think this is one of those poems where that doesn't matter, because she's just trying to convey her situation. And I suppose a comment like that also doesn't matter because it had no constructive message in it at all.
     
    FreindlyMuskOx, Apr 1, 2007
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  7. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    I can relate to this.
    From both sides of the emotional spectrum.
     
    Malapascua, Apr 4, 2007
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  9. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    I can related with Nalencer :tongue:

    it's boring, lacks creativity, and doesn't transmit the emotion well either
     
    Duck, Apr 4, 2007
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  11. las puertas

    las puertas Member

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    thanks 4 the comments, yeah its somethin i wrote to just express/explain my situation
     
    las puertas, Apr 7, 2007
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