A Stone Idol

Spit on the front of a god, in the name of absurdity
and stroll away
nonchalantly
with a hop in your step,
Because he is an object
and he's not going to release his potent anger
he's an idol;
a chunk of chisled stone.
Your action is as relevant as
a quark jumping from its path
depending on one's perspective,
one's nihilistic wrath,
one's self-worth can be diminished.
You, a flash of light, that will not last





What do you guys think of this?

 

I think this is a good first draft. Take some parts out and put others in so as to highlight out the main idea. Interesting words.

Also, I really super totally <3 your username ^_^.

 

I think it's good

 

i like it.. feels a bit incomplete, but sure want to read more of it.

 

Thanks for the comments, and for the username compliment.