how does it feel?

How does it feel to know he’ll never love you like you love him?
what does it feel like to know he can’t even stand to be in a room with you any longer let alone talk to you
inside you carry your pain because no one in the outside world would ever understand
the end is a part of your every beginning now where is the hope for a new sun? How does it feel?

 

I dislike this piece most fervently.

 

" I dislike this piece most fervently."

I think this is one of those poems where that doesn't matter, because she's just trying to convey her situation. And I suppose a comment like that also doesn't matter because it had no constructive message in it at all.

 

I can relate to this.
From both sides of the emotional spectrum.

 

I can related with Nalencer :tongue:

it's boring, lacks creativity, and doesn't transmit the emotion well either

 

thanks 4 the comments, yeah its somethin i wrote to just express/explain my situation