golden aura

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by soaringeagle, Mar 31, 2007.

  1. soaringeagle

    soaringeagle Senior Member

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    golden aura burning brightly
    loves passions growing nightly
    feiry spirit my hearts delight
    honnest beautiful wild and free
    oh how high you have lifted me

    in my blindness reaching for a hand
    finding my confort in a far away land
    she glowed so brightly i could hardly stand
    what is this feeling this was never planned
    i only wanted to talk and try to understand

    honnesty you see with me is the best policy
    we bared our souls before bared our bodies
    we opened our hearts to new possibilies
    seconds stretched to lifetimes discoveries
    before i knew it youd become a part of me

    my angel my light my love and my life
    how in weeks did you become my wife
    you maybe young and i maybe midlife
    but in love our lives are full and rife
    together we shall be till the afterlife
     
  2. Autentique

    Autentique wonderfabulastic

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    you make my blood sugar rise

    :)

    i love u.
     
  3. soaringeagle

    soaringeagle Senior Member

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    you make my eares disapear behind my massive smile

    & i love you too...my muse
     
  4. BreakingBeautifully

    BreakingBeautifully Member

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    Wow, this is an absolutly beautiful poem. It's one of the best I've heard. You definitly have a talent :)
     
  5. FreindlyMuskOx

    FreindlyMuskOx Member

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    I liked it. :)

    It's refreshing how you express yourself without trite sayings!
     
  6. soaringeagle

    soaringeagle Senior Member

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    heehee thnx :) it was really the 1st 1 ive written in ages, totaly inspired by my golden aura'd gal with the technicolor twist ;)
     
  7. Loveminx

    Loveminx Sports Racer

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    beautiful ^_^
     

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