Chewing A Spinach Leaf

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by FreindlyMuskOx, Mar 31, 2007.

  1. FreindlyMuskOx

    FreindlyMuskOx Member

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    This is the last poem I wrote...

    Chewing a spinach leaf
    in the same manner as the giraffe
    all molars
    jaw grinding back and forth
    standing in the kitchen
    storm cloud-filtered sunlight
    forms my shadow on the linoleum
    The scent of a freshly peeled orange
    de
    e
    e
    ep breath

    moment

    gone

    What do you think?
     
  2. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    I think you are very lucky that you did not choke on all the spinich you were eating when you inhaled :p

    haha, I love the image you present here
     
  3. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Methinks its amazing xD

    I love it.
     
  4. FreindlyMuskOx

    FreindlyMuskOx Member

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    Lol, thanks guys.
     
  5. BreakingBeautifully

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    I also really like it :)
     

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