love the flow and the coiling: that's what a lot of music looks like to me. red is a very subjective color, people either want lots of none (I'm a none, but it works with the greens you use) the middle one almost seems without a focus point, and maybe it is supposed to be that way, but it creates a bit of vertigo. take better pictures: I hang on a blank wall and use lights, but outside on an overcast day works to give diffused light.
A more definite focal point and theme would help, but that depends on what you are going for, the third especially, maybe more details too (just the 3rd), that one could use lighter colors too, red/orange isn't usually aesthetically pleasing in large quantities, but they look great as is!
I don't think it requires more of a focal point. It makes the art more invigorating. But then again, it is art. To each his/her own. They truly splendid pieces. Great job.
i think those look cool, cool like clementines and pomegrantes my opinion on the focal point is that the painting is pretty cool to have different focal points diffused, makes it captivating. totally on the art comment above being subjective and unique and individual
Beautiful! I love the treatment of the subject sooo much. I could look at this for a very very long time!
