The Widower's Trail (poem)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gratefulvegan, Mar 25, 2007.

  1. gratefulvegan

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    The Widower's Trail

    -Jim

    There is a path of rocks and stones

    Of broken twigs and scattered leaves

    It winds throughout the depths of green

    The changing tones of lively trees



    Footprints fill with thriving weeds

    As flowers fade and wither dry

    The sunlit sky reverts to black

    And clouds of ancient grey collide



    But far beyond this stretch of dark

    A distant light controls the night

    Two eyes of sparkling color shine

    With brilliant glow and beauty fine



    The distant figure, draped in silk

    Grows fainter as he travels near

    He leaves a rose with buried bones

    And walks along the path alone
     
  2. OceanStar

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    You're damn good! I really, really liked it.
     
  3. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Yeah...Thats a very cool poem.
     
  4. feralfey

    feralfey Member

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    Very nice.
     
  5. Major Peacenik

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    I like you.
     
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