Grandma's Attic

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by skyfire, Mar 23, 2007.

  1. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    Needle poised over a scratched vinyl record,
    grooves flooded with attic dust
    and silenced.
    The rumpled tutu of a not-so-prima ballerina
    would once pirouette with dainty satin slippers.
    An unsettled dusk sunlight
    filtered and trickled through sepia photographs,
    warped and peeling memories
    of grandma's sunday chocolate chip cookies.
    The brushes are missing
    from cracked-desert dry water paint kits.
    Like empty rusted mouse traps, unset,
    there are no children smiling.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Wow, very impressive! I love the attention to detail, very specific and tangible. Great sentiment too.
     
  3. Adventurous

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    That was a lovely piece.

    I thought it was really special, and empathizing.

    Thanks for the read ;).
     
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