Would someone write me lyrics????

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Skerb, Mar 19, 2007.

  1. Skerb

    Skerb Member

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    I'm looking for someone to write some lyrics for me.
    I've tried but just can't seem to get anything down that I much like.
    I have the musical idea pretty well done.
    The theme would be about questioning friendship. when a friend "X" reaches out
    and the friend "Y" doesn't respond. did friend "Y" know "X" was reaching out? why didn't they respond? does time destroy friendships? are friendships now forever. then the ponderance that maybe its a temporal thing. i don't know.
    also friend X is male, friend Y female both heteros.

    i would certainly give lyric credit wherever i post the tune. like you can post it if you want, wherever you want. i'd put on my myspace, maybe youtube if i can get my video skills up to par... ;) cheers, keep on keepin' on.
     
  2. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    I wouldn't mind, but I really can't write to order. That's some pretty specific guidelines. Why that?
     
  3. soundstepper323

    soundstepper323 Banned

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    can you post an MP3 of the music you have? Maybe i could write to fit that
     
  4. Skerb

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    I can get an mp3, sure.. maybe with some of my initial lyrics and vocal melody, you can integrate or toss the words. but that's a good idea.. that way hopefully i can send out the vibe and you have the background as much or little of it you can say would be great.. if you want the 'why that' part, i just posted from experience in the thread " Hip Forums > Mind Trips > True Confessions > Should I do it??" I'm just trying to offer advice to this person here, but my last post ties in with this...
     
  5. BrooklynRider

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    I'll give it a shot. Let me see what I come up with...
     
  6. BrooklynRider

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    Considering our interaction in the "introduce yourself" thread. You know that I'm in a lonely stage. I'll PM you what I just wrote and give you my name.
     
  7. BrooklynRider

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    If you have the music, it would be easier for me to write to your melody. Or, I can develop a melody from the music.
     
  8. Skerb

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    BrooklynRider, your poem is spot on! I'll send you a rough of what I have as soon as I can, 1-2 days hopefully! Thanks! - Skerb
     
  9. BrooklynRider

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    Glad I could help.
     
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