A Sonnet

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by floyd4peace, Mar 10, 2007.

  1. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    The creature slept 'neath the tree in deep shade
    And glared at those who by it passed disturbed
    It would love no more than the most t'would hate
    Till alas it arose and killed a bird
    This beast, a creature, one without a name
    It stood higher than a mountain up straight
    But would slouch and approach its helpless aim
    And would make a display of its slow fate
    Bearing great fangs each of a four inch length
    With a flow of blood endless as it drips
    An animal's slain to increase its strength
    And it roamed the Earth till it boarded ships
    This creature then killed so mercilessly
    That there was no food and it could not be


    I realize there are some meter errors but I wrote it in about five to ten minutes for an English assignment so try and pretend it's perfect.
    -Floyd
     
  2. imherbert

    imherbert Member

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    It's perfect. Sonnets, are not an easy thing!

    I tend to live in iambic pentameter...Stressed, unstressed, stressed, unstressed.

    or is it unstressed, stressed, unstressed, stressed...

    Either way, I prefer my syllables unstressed...I drink less that way.
     
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