heart of glass

when my heart breaks
the glass gets all over the floor
here you come skidding around
a closed memory lane
stomping around like elephants
don't you know that it hurts like hell
to traipse all over my emotions like that
and then pull an about-face
and trumpet your way out of my life?

 

i like the way you word your emotions, they are very heart felt,

 

thank you very much.
i'm an aspiring poet.
good feedback means a lot.
i should have a poery book out in maybe a year?
so, would you buy it? =]

 

Blondie beat you to the title.

 

so?
i can still use it.
i just cant use her lyrics.
not that i would want to anyway.
not a blondie fan.

 

good luck with the book..i like this one..it's short and concise and gets the point across.

 

your writing is really good and i hope you post some more for all of us to read

 

This poem put a few fascinating spins on different ways of thinking, and from different perspectives... I like the content a lot, I long for more vivid diction though.

 

why thank you dream scholzara.
that really means alot, lol.

 

I liked it good wording