Opinions, please

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippyman, Feb 27, 2007.

  1. hippyman

    hippyman Member

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    Fear

    It lurks around you, in the dead of night,
    Yet stays hidden inside you, in the light,
    It is the cold wind in the storm,
    The tightening in your stomach, and crawling under your skin,
    That you can't get rid of
    No matter your age,
    You cannot free yourself of it.
    As you grow, it grows,
    As you change, it changes,
    It will leave, only with your death.
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I like it! Good work.

    Peace and love
     
  3. OleFlowerMan

    OleFlowerMan Member

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    Certainly not a philosophy for living . .

    So whattaya like about it sad&heartbroken Hippie chick666 ?

    That it's so fatalistic and depressive. That it implies that you are powerless, a victim of fate.......

    What do you like about it for real ?
     
  4. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    good work keep on writing, i like it
     
  5. hippyman

    hippyman Member

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    You're right, not a philosophy for living, but think about it, do we really have any power?
     
  6. OleFlowerMan

    OleFlowerMan Member

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    All the power you learn to use :) All the power you believe you have.
    I have alot of power :) I'm getting more too. :party:
     
  7. hopefaithlove

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    whether or not its depressing its analogies are fantastic and the picture it creates in ur mind is vivid. the topic itself doesnt matter. u can right bout wutever and it will be great if it has meaning to u.
     
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