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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shaba, Mar 1, 2007.

  1. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    Tall tales wash away
    The short stories never stick
    I've searched for the truth
    But all I found was this.
    My mind has gone
    My heart disappeared
    I'm looking with my eyes
    And found it with my ears
    All I was, had never been
    Every step forward
    Can't be seen.
    The only footprints left behind
    Have been washed by the sea
    The only trace of my life
    Is six feet deep.
     
    shaba, Mar 1, 2007
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  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Dude, that seems to be the fear of many people.
    To leave no legacy behind.
    Very nice piece.
     
    Malapascua, Mar 2, 2007
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  5. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    awesome piece of work. keep writing. i look forward to reading more
     
    dragonangelbiker, Mar 2, 2007
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  7. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    thanks guys. I'm glad other people can relate.
     
    shaba, Mar 4, 2007
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  9. hopefaithlove

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    that was so cool man!!!! ur a great writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    hopefaithlove, Mar 4, 2007
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