She Said Dont Do It

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dragonangelbiker, Feb 28, 2007.

  1. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    She Said Dont Do It
    I Said Why Not
    She Says Shes Been Thru It
    I Say She Loves What She Got
    She Said Dont Do It
    I Love A Thrill
    She Said Dont Do It
    But I Did It Still
    Now Im Lying Six Feet Under
    The Ground Is Wet With Snow
    She Said Dont Do It
    And Now I Finally Know
    These Days Can Easily Be Numbered
    A Beer Or Two Can Tell
    Hell Is So Far Under
    And Yet I Did It Still
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    I can see many powerful messages in this poem.
    Great work.
     
  3. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    Death is so powerful.
     
  4. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    nice very nice
     
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