I got back from a friends after hearing Deltron 3030 for the first time tonight and these words came to me in the verse of "3030" you are glorious you know this with everything you are being and thinking it pains us to see you're face in such agony but what is worse is when you reverse it's uncanny and strange your game is plain but complex and beautiful like all that is but you're the reflection of what was and what shall be like eternal, notcturnal, hazards of flight which upon first light signal a stretch upon unimaginable strengths none us can muster we fluster at the thought of others in control, they know what we don't it's so why don't we just say that all are equal it's trivial to decide who's alive or dead when it's all in you're head! Haha yeah so that just flowed out of my head about five minutes ago with a few minor fix ups. I dunno I've never written poetry in my life except for 6th grade stuff, so I don't know what's good, which I know is entirely subjective, but I kinda like this one. and I like sharing! If you've got one sandwich, cut that thing in half! Haha yeah alright well you guys have a fabulous morning/day/evening/night edit: I just decided the name would be "Strange when you're all right (right?)" edit2: I realized it's not giving me the spacings between words that I want which will tell you how to rap it, but...I guess if you know "3030" you should be able to get it
I guess I didn't mention that I would like some feedback but it would be appreciated if it's possible. Thanks! oh and I also have a few more I wouldn't mind some critiquing on, if anyone is interested i can post those up.
