children of the sunrise

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guinea, Feb 23, 2007.

  1. guinea

    guinea Member

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    i'm just sitting here,
    outside watching the sunrise.
    wishing you both where here
    so i could be holding you both so near.

    it's silent here,
    outside the world is standing still.
    from my eye sheds a tear
    i can hear the sweet laughter in my ear.

    it's peaceful here
    outside i find peace of mind.
    then i think of the two of you
    and i can't help but wonder if you think of me too.
     
  2. sexbanshee

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    Aaaahhhh so full of emotion....I can feel this so deeply....

    *sob*

    Wonderful work!
     
  3. dragonangelbiker

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    excellent work. everyone of your poems really capture the moment
     
  4. guinea

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    to me that is the whole point of poetry, capturing the moment, it is so encouraging that i am able to capture it so clearly for others, its overwhelming
     
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