Those nights...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sunburst, Feb 22, 2007.

  1. Sunburst

    Sunburst Fairy

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    The music penetrates deeper

    when we’re on my mattress on the floor

    feeling each hit of the drum and playing with each other’s hair

    I pick off my old nail polish and you kiss me

    strings of melody tangled in our legs and lungs

    never let me go

    odd shapes drawn on our skin and a feeling imagined

    by the tongue of a poet and the pen of a whore

    let’s spend our evening staring at a blank wall

    thinking of now and never

    and always

    days go by and we don’t move

    I am hungry and happy next to your still body

    regular words transform

    and even breaths collide in an anamorphic hit

    memories like paintings of birth

    I’ll never forget
     
  2. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    definetly different
     
  3. SunFree

    SunFree Member

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    I really like "tongue of a poet and pen of a whore," it has a fabulous ring to it.
     
  4. scruuuub

    scruuuub Member

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    i liked the line "odd shapes drawn on our skin and a feeling imagined" , i agree with dragonangelbiker about it being different and different is what i enjoy , i liked it :)

    peace and love
     
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