S o n n e t

Let me gaze into the depths of your eyes
Don't fear that I will decipher your soul
I so badly want to hear your deep sighs
To share intimate moments and have you lose control

I want to hear your ecstasy and cries
Have you tell me "Without you, I'm not whole."
To slip effortlessly between you thighs
To make you feel hot sweetness below

You say you're not ready to give up that flower
Then I will wait for you to concede
Now may not be the right time, the right hour

I don't expect you, before me, to cower
You should know by now that it's you I need
Only you , have over me, this wonderful power

 

i really liked it man , you definitely have talent in writing , don't know why but i especially loved the last stanza , good job

peace and love

 

Thanks man.
I haven't written a sonnet since high school.

 

wow. that was really good. i loved it. keep on writing

 

now that is passion man, i bet you melted someone's heart with that one. keep writing

 

Well, after the complements I received here, I decided to let my girl read it, and she wept. That wasn't my goal, but she was touched.

 

beautiful and lovely.....

oh how I would love someone to write such poetry for me....

 

Then you may consider it written for you.
Happy birthday, Merry Christmas, happy Mother's day, Happy Valentines day, etc.

I'm glad so many people enjoy my words.

 

very cool. i like it