What'd I call this I wonder

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ruberx Omati, Feb 21, 2007.

  1. Ruberx Omati

    Ruberx Omati The Truth

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    The silk soft touch of your hands
    guiding me as we go
    This feels so beautiful
    So comfortable, so nice and slow
    Intimacy binds us, connects us before we know
    Connects us before we know where we're going

    And I know that we're in love
    I know at least that I'm in love
    And I'm pretty sure that you are too
    For the first time...I feel secure

    The way we lie together
    drifting into perfect sleep
    The way you hold me close
    The feeling of your heartbeat

    It all makes perfect sense

    Monty Burns. Muah Mah
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Very nice.
    (Are you from the Philippines?)
     
  3. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    good work, keep writing
     
  4. Ruberx Omati

    Ruberx Omati The Truth

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    Nope, not from philippines...why may I ask would you ponder so precariously so tentatively and so specifically
     
  5. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    because you signed off of the origianl post with "Muah Mah", and I thought I recognized that as something that is said when one is leaving another for a while, in the Philippines.

    Just curious.
     
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