visions of peace

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guinea, Feb 21, 2007.

  1. guinea

    guinea Member

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    ponder for a moment
    this mystery with me.
    how insanity to some,
    seem so sane to me?
    will you realease your mind to me?
    Destroy power,
    for when it does cease to be.
    it can no longer destroy
    Eqaulity!
    Eqaulity, when this is achieved,
    will be only the begining
    of my dream.
    the vision that I percieve:
    Love,Joy,Harmony, and Peace.
    the foundation
    of my creation,
    that will exist in my infincy.
     
  2. dragonangelbiker

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    really good, just like all the other ones that you have posted,keep writing i love reading your poems
     
  3. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    first four lines are perfect.
     
  4. guinea

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    perception is such a vast subject, because perception can be altered in so many different ways. like what makes yellow, yellow. is it not possible that yellow to you can be green to me. the way life is percieved thru my eyes combined with the perceptions of others thru there expresion is a really wild ride man
     
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