Hi, Im new here. Im still fairly new to the poetry world, so Id like to build my skills as much as I can. Heres my favorite work so far, any input you can give would be appreciated. Road Trip The engine’s burning The gas tank is yearning But nothing can stop my beast of steel So I hold fast to the wheel Putting it all behind me That city missing jubilee My ears to my headset Next stop is the sunset Forgetting my pain and sorrow Not caring what comes tomorrow It doesn’t matter now All the sadness, my wheels won’t allow With my foot pressed down firm I’m past the limit, the gauge confirms Free in the cool air Devoid of the city blare And so the beast takes control The only time I can feel whole When my world is full of ripping wind Euphoric in my favorite sin No one’s there to hear my voice But this was by my own choice No more drama, no more strife No one left to run my life It’s just me and the Horizon So let’s Ride
If this it "just starting out", then I suspect you have a bright future writing poetry. That was a very nice piece.
that was really good [especially for someoe who just started writing] i look forward to reading more of your poetry
Thanks for the replies, and yes I am still starting out. I hope I can build up my skills to improve this one, its my favorite so far in terms of the theme. Ill get some of my other works up soon.
i honestly found this to be very cute and young it seems like it could end up being somethign very nice
don't worry about building anything. the more you write, the more that neural net will build itself. just make sure you never force it, and it will grow quite naturally. you are definitely a poet, friend.
