Summer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RELAYER, Feb 19, 2007.

  1. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    Summer

    I find beauty in strange places and
    inspiration comes from observing dull and idle movement
    pushing forward through the crowd, raising my hand
    screaming for them Please Wait! Please! but I dont think they
    hear me. So I wont be there with you, sorry Hey at least I
    Tried! But again I find myseld on the floor, there are
    no windows here and they NEVER tell us what time it is. And
    dont even ask about the food, or the toilet. I wouldnt have
    really cared, if I did care at all I dont remember, but
    the problem was that all of my time spent thinking was spent
    wondering if you are OK, I know your not but it doesnt hurt to lie
    a little bit does it? Im ok, trust me, I've been in much
    worse situations before, this one is nothing. Although
    I do miss the sunlite, and smoke, and eating, and playing with
    the baby, and playing music, and sex, and beer.
    But only so much. I also kind of like it here, too, I am starting
    to find it not only normal, but quite funny. You should
    hear the opinions we have, I would LOVE to share them with
    you, but then again you never understood my sense of
    humor anyway.
     
  2. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    you captured memories, this is beautiful
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Cold heartless place of steel and concrete........
    Very good.
     
  4. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    Thanks Sirius, its about when I went to jail when I was on vacation with my ex and my son, and this is written to the ex :)
     
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