Blue Button

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RELAYER, Feb 17, 2007.

  1. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    I never posted any of my writing here before! So get ready for some bizarre fun and excitement, and enter into the mind of Relayer the psycho life-liver! :)

    Blue Button

    Red noses and his face was redder than mine
    Since the wind never seems to let it up when the air is by the river
    And the frustration bubbling where the tension line may snap at
    Any moment, maybe this one, maybe this one
    Maybe not so keep moving around the back of your trailer nothing
    To see here people just what do you really want anyway?
    Where is aisle 5 I never been here man? That way, to the back left
    It is what you want, or do you need it? Not really, I guess, I
    Wont really miss it but he might. Jesus that must be uncomfortable!
    Grab it, shut the door. Never mind it, doors tend to shut themselves
    These days just like tension lines snap themselves
    No outside force is apparently necessary for this device ha ha! I
    Figured something out on my own for once! But
    That’s never enough for them is it?
    “….the blue button you waste of life.” I don’t see any fucking
    Blue button!
    Oh, that’s why! Ha ha it’s a square –
    No, no, that’s backwards, put it down! Ok were back on
    Track not quite on point but they always fall below my girls anyway. Glance
    To the farthest possible decimal dot but its blocked something is
    In my way I just want to thank Allah for His patience of course
    That isn’t going to happen because this is never my day
    Always the laughter though it’s not quite all that funny is it
    What I think it is? Why would I park out front of a police station? I
    Guess these things have to happen every couple of years I mean
    After all it keeps the balance off which is good when your measuring in
    Units of cosmic waves and upside down circuit boards
    So yea, lets get this shit started
    Turn it over babe come on you know I love it again and again
    I cant believe we are that wet and there is ice under my feet
    Asshole!!! Eh, whatever he’ll get what’s coming to her
    Light that and breathe in breathe
    Out the smoke its over, please sit back relax and shift on 2

    J. Rively 2007
     
  2. Smelly Socks

    Smelly Socks is probably lurking

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    Wow. Amazing.

    Your writing is so abstract, yet it draws you in.

    I love it.

    :)
     
  3. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    Thanks :) Im going to post some more in this thread when I get time, and more new ones as more weird shit happens to me
     
  4. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    by the way, I'll tell you when I have time what this is about, maybe its better when you know whats going in? Although I guess if one really reads this they can make their own little movies in their head, so the story may ruin this. But, maybe not
     
  5. Madcap Laughs

    Madcap Laughs Member

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    your poems are brilliant man
     
  6. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    Thanks Madcap! :) so...I should keep going?
     
  7. Justagrrl420

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    wow...keep writing..i'd kill to write like you. keep up the good work
     

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