Autumn

Her body lies by the street
Her tears cry as I comfort her, please don't weep
Her pain and her voice seems rough and cracked
And I wait, for Autumn
A month they say she will come back
But her pain will never heal
She doesnt forget the stuff in the past
And I wait, for Aututmn
When warm wind comes
I will wait for her usual guitar strums
And I'll wait, for Autumn

Her body is healing
She says she never experienced this feeling
But she seems so sad and lonely
I promise her, the last thing I'll do
Is wait for Autumn
She sits in the corner
And plays her gutiar
Lonely and waits for me
But I never come
Because I wait for Autumn.

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